Boys, very good work but there are some issues. First, it's not "came" but "come". Came is the past simple of come. Second, the word "nationalist" is very negative. A better choice would have been "patriot". And finally, avoid the use of "please" because the idea is that people should be proud to be part of the army and not to feel as though they were doing them a favour by joining. The same with the "if you can". Mark: 8, 50 (eight fifty)
Boys, very good work but there are some issues.
ResponderEliminarFirst, it's not "came" but "come". Came is the past simple of come.
Second, the word "nationalist" is very negative. A better choice would have been "patriot".
And finally, avoid the use of "please" because the idea is that people should be proud to be part of the army and not to feel as though they were doing them a favour by joining. The same with the "if you can".
Mark: 8, 50 (eight fifty)